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IMDB rating: 7.10 Plot: Adam, a Jewish teenager and Yasmine, a young Lebanese girl, fall in love. Their relationship is overshadowed by the ongoing feud between their families, but also by the raging conflict in the Middle East. From the heart of Mile End, Montreal’s multicultural neighborhood, comes this modern-day story of two lovers fighting against the walls that separate them. |
Actors: Dwyre Jesse Aaron,Ahmarani Paul,Gascon Gabriel,Benskin Tyrone,Nesrallah Kyler,Travis Malcolm,Kroetsch Neil,Sabongui Patrick,Ezerzer Oury,Spreekmeester Stephen,Bauer Ya’Acov,Young Ferelith,Drama,
Can you please read my story…what do you think?
Please read this part first, or this won’t make sense. Sorry, it’s really long, but could you please read at least some of it and tell me what you think? I’m going to edit out some of the too long descriptions as in "he said BLANKily, as he BLANK BLANK", like someone said. I did it a bit, I’ll do it later.
Please could you give only constructive criticism, I’m 14 years old. If you could say the good parts too so I don’t change them?
In the first post (the other question) I copied and pasted wrong, so ignore the start, and go to additional details.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=Av3wjLsaldFScM_NvK9ZPhjty6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20091227024612AAEzgLl
The rest so far…
In the distance they could see Anne starting the engine of her 4WD, steering into another street and out of their sight.
Tags: 2008, Ahmarani Paul, Bauer Ya'Acov, Benskin Tyrone, Drama, Dwyre Jesse Aaron, Ezerzer Oury, Gascon Gabriel, Kroetsch Neil, Nesrallah Kyler, Sabongui Patrick, Spreekmeester Stephen, Travis Malcolm, Young Ferelith